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hi jillwhat if you changed the ing verbs to straight present tense? makes it more immediate for me. (no, i'm not the gerund cop and use them all the time:-)
thanks pris. i'll take your suggestion.
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hi jill
what if you changed the ing verbs to straight present tense? makes it more immediate for me. (no, i'm not the gerund cop and use them all the time:-)
thanks pris. i'll take your suggestion.
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