1. the making of eve
adam, ex nihilo, 
drugged in a tub 
ice-filled in a hotel & you, 
shadow next to the Gideon’s 
using a very small trowel
putting her arms on.
you’ve spent hours 
before the mirror/ posing 
with your finger pointed, 
deciding what belongs;
such intelligent design.
          2. the marking of eve
in the surveillance monitors
they’re searching for large
leaves. six-day sleepless,
exhausted, the cathode ray 
tube flickers in your room,
while you're chainsmoking 
camels to calm your nerves.
storm out in your bathrobe
to give them bellybuttons &
punctuation marks, a pox 
on their mitochondria, 
you became I & the silence.
          3. the marketing of eve
morning closes the flaps of your universe & you
tuck it under your arm. there's a curtain of frost 
on the windowsill, damn AC kept you up all night, 
the one night of rest. struggling to get your universe 
& luggage through the hotel door together [shut
before your self can wedge in properly] you descend 
the stairwell to your Lincoln & head to the convention 
center for the exhibition--your booth next to the other 
creators & their solutions for filling the loneliness.
Thursday, June 30, 2005
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4 comments:
well this is excellent. reminded me of Dirty Pretty Things and then some other cool stuff. really like that bible too at the onset.
digi-voodoo.
i find this reads aloud very nice also.
very nice.
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i like this very much. primodial modernity. very imaginative work.
love the progression in the subtitles, and the sonics here are great. Part 2 I think is my favorite
One title, so many takes. This is great fun to read, right into the end punch.
Helm.
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