Sunday, June 05, 2005

El Culo de Bettie Jack Anders can critique it:

El Culo de Bettie

O, what is the point of speaking
in anything but tongues?
There are too many
throw pillows in this room...
back into me, back that
into me, let me
make your eyes change color.
O beat me, beat me, beat me
at air hockey.


anders said...

right. this is for my sex one. essay on poetry and sex. ok let me go write it. thx.

didi said...

Here is the review of your poem:

Jill said...

i love this. the subtle change in tone towards the end took me by surprise.