I like this. I like the simplicity of the imagery and how it fits so well.
So succinct and so vivid. Well done, Jill.nancy.
thank you pris and nancy.
This poem expresses the search for identity and yearning for feeling in (our) collective social construct. The simplicity helps with the ambiguity. Also, the repetition of ocean hit me hard.
I kept misreading this line thusly:Ocean, ocean, where do you end?Bravo on this, Jill. Your compression is just incredible.
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