Saturday, July 23, 2005

Elpidio, Illegal Alien, In The North Tower

Crossing the Sonoran Desert all he could think of
was getting to the Promised Land,
living the great white way

and sending some money back home
to help his father and mother,
his brothers and sisters.

A cousin was already in New York City,
loading clothes into trucks,
clothes going who knows where,

clothes made in China,
clothes made in South America,
so when Elpidio finally

made it to the Big Apple
he lived with his cousin
in a one-bedroom apartment,

he delivered breakfast to the North Tower
every morning, tacos, pancakes, donuts, gourmet coffee.
When the plane hit he was on the 90th floor.

Later, he felt himself falling with the building,
sucking in the smell of concrete, fire, sky.
Suddenly, he flew in all directions

and he couldn’t keep track of himself.
They found some of his body parts,
but they did not count him as a human being.

4 comments:

Christopher T. George said...

Hi RC and Sourfish

Good work, RC. Sourfish, as I see it, the last line is meant to be ironic and a statement about the status of illegal aliens.

This poem reminds me of Mustansir Dalvi's "Hunchback of the World Trade Centre" see http://www.desertmoonreview.com/gallery.html#hunch

Chris

RC said...

Thanks for the comments.The "Later" is there to separate the time the plane hit and the collapse of the Tower.As far is the last line, it is nothing but the truth,unfortunately.

Pris said...

I think this is really powerful. Maybe you've edited this since the comments, but the ending works for me.

Erin said...

I love the ending myself, but then I've always been one to get riled over the treatment of immigrants.