Monday, September 19, 2005

Another one

After the "making of eve" contest a little while back, I kept thinking about the idea, finally decided to do another one, and go in a slightly different direction with it.

                 artemis calls out
     in the petaled light. through the flint-cold
evenings passing through winter i've
come here, where water rises
     from the ground, the rocks
washed with shadow
and murmer of leaf-sound,
    in leaf-soft air. memory
plays in the breeze, tells
another time before, when groves
    and meadows like this one
spilled rampant over the earth,
green plains and backbone
     of high ridges that now stretch bare.
machinery of industrial minds, calculus
of diminishing returns
  that could expand but not grow,
ferment but not bare fruit, grab
but not grasp. the grinning man
   in the picture tube shrugging
his shoulders, the tall eminence
whose eyes do not close or open,
 the haggard-faced man, shoulders
slumping, who hisses
it doesn't matter as long as i think it.
 ashes of winter, rubble of spring, here
to this place, where the water
gathers and deepens,
   the green boughs bend and dip
near the lone wind-worn column
that stands broken amid broken stone,
   in the rising evening, under tears
of starlight. now, in the silence,
a drop of moonlight
   touches the rippled surface,
cool and petal-soft, nearly solid,
almost a sound, a voice
   high and bow-curved -- alone,
speaking no words, now
i step toward the water's edge,
  listening to the roar and the whisper,
the silence, the memory
of flight and new-sprung desire,
     and step forward out into the water.

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

Beautiful poem. Keep writing!

Lyle Daggett said...

Sweetbudderfly,
Kira,

Thanks very much.

Took me a few tries to figure out the right sequence for the html tags to get the ragged left-and-right margins and the stanza breaks to show. (Every time I got one right, it cancelled the other. Finally figured it out.)

Again thanks.

Pris said...

Lyle...excellent and so moving!

Lyle Daggett said...

Thanks, Pris.