Tuesday, April 11, 2006

but i know / /

out side / every thing is anxious / trees
nervous with buds / the ground is quiver ing
a gain / / ah / rest less ness of spring



François said...

I absolutely adore how the white space is compressing the text, further increasing the pressure on the word "anxiety" in the text ... and that last slash.

666poetry-finchnot said...

francois / thank you

that last slash always shows up

because i 'need' the white space

to me the poem is so much about the
space around it

i'm please you like the poem

i checked out your myspace blog this morning / / i like it

you would n't happen to be one of those party boys would you? lol

just kidding with you

thanx again

François said...

I have many sins, madam, and partying too much instead of working on my reviews is one of them. :)