Friday, October 27, 2006

cracked land stranger as prolonged as chain
of the real ungoverned and very you yet
feeding the tail of hesitancy there
bubble to believing time o
when we arm ourselves with spinning
and spun sun to stitch morning shores
should let aloud dear violate with asbestos mind
a mouthaunted fall to take home

1 comment:

burning moon said...

Very nicely done. I liked reading this. It's a very interesting way to write.

The words all swam and jiggled around into different and interesting places, although I had some trouble with this line:

'should let aloud dear violate with'

didn't work quite as well for me as the rest.
Nice write though nonetheless.