Thursday, July 27, 2006

twilight gestalt talk
and tantric dark
i'm this pressure quivering
with romantic english
cohabitation on most wild shade
foliage of turns into city
shock lot of floor fatigued
of wood mysteries

1 comment:

david raphael israel said...

notwithstanding my inability to navigate the grammar (in any usual way), I find in this 8-line poem happy echos of Chinese shi (and some of that form's ripples in kindred poetries), and would count this among your more notable poems.