Saturday, February 25, 2006

Overdelivers for the Price

mist skin
evaporates into
smoke and
camera effects
cropped just so
far enough down
not too far
tease cropping cleavage
head tilt look
to side or
diagonally up
or smolder in
direct gaze
it's all about lighting
and typing
lots of xs and
ooooooos

* * *

opaque gray
glass wrapped
in label
allure of warm
graphic design
brown|red|brown
striped horizontally
down granite stone
centered
two overlapping
amorphous shapes
off to side
it's a young wine
with a name
from another land
first word foreign
next word
real
?

really it's the review
and price
$8.69

plus I like to say
Garnacha

2 comments:

Michelle e o said...

Great writes Julia, I already you that though!

J.B. Rowell said...

Thanks again Michelle. I have Luc and his friends and Pris to thank too fot this one.
Been fun,
Julia