This drought
has ants drifting in
bath water
all around me.
Even advancing
along the engine block
to the power steering leak
or for motor oil
and death,
as long as it’s wet.
Friday, July 28, 2006
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5 comments:
It's a sad day when ants must get help from man's creations.I like this poem.
i like this, esp that ending!
Thank you both!
Wow--I love the assonance throughout this poem. Bravo!
Thank you for appreciating its musicality. :)
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