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I like this. I like the simplicity of the imagery and how it fits so well.
So succinct and so vivid. Well done, Jill.nancy.
thank you pris and nancy.
I kept misreading this line thusly:Ocean, ocean, where do you end?Bravo on this, Jill. Your compression is just incredible.
Lovely.
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I like this. I like the simplicity of the imagery and how it fits so well.
So succinct and so vivid. Well done, Jill.
nancy.
thank you pris and nancy.
I kept misreading this line thusly:
Ocean, ocean,
where do you end?
Bravo on this, Jill. Your compression is just incredible.
Lovely.
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