tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13358346.post116195081970951751..comments2023-10-10T11:56:24.878-05:00Comments on cafe' cafe': Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08195202743154382432noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13358346.post-1162353717836893392006-10-31T23:01:00.000-05:002006-10-31T23:01:00.000-05:00boy there is a lot of stuff in here. reads like a ...boy there is a lot of stuff in here. reads like a rap, beat, spoken-word poem which would no doubt make it better heard read live.<BR/><BR/>it would be hard to pick out just one part but i think this is the part i liked best:<BR/><BR/><I>Come lover, take naught bye the bye, walk not the lanes, they are thoroughfares no more, no more the little dirts we crush-call humus cherts, have settled all their score for earth, for the likes of birds, leaves, bark, roots furl unfurl.</I><BR/><BR/>there's more though.<BR/><BR/><I>Theres a starman waiting in the sky<BR/>He'd like to come and meet us<BR/>But he thinks he'd blow our minds</I>Davidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01901598815872779086noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13358346.post-1162184699295071302006-10-30T00:04:00.000-05:002006-10-30T00:04:00.000-05:00what a romp, like a good tour through the cities a...what a romp, like a good tour through the cities and the best parts of the countryside...i love the flow, the give and take, the language. this makes me want to read more and write more. thanks.Lee Herrickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13989557906560291595noreply@blogger.com