tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13358346.post115788539523406265..comments2023-10-10T11:56:24.878-05:00Comments on cafe' cafe': Cayo Coco (for the challenge)Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08195202743154382432noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13358346.post-1158160777545532732006-09-13T10:19:00.000-05:002006-09-13T10:19:00.000-05:00Thanks, LyleI don't do a challenge if it doesn't f...Thanks, Lyle<BR/>I don't do a challenge if it doesn't fit into something that works for me in my own head, so double thanks for confirming that it worked for you, too.<BR/><BR/>PrisPrishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03970753027686923295noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13358346.post-1158032412715718952006-09-11T22:40:00.000-05:002006-09-11T22:40:00.000-05:00After my comment about the range of the language, ...After my comment about the range of the language, as I was looking through more of the recent poems here, it dawned on me that each of the specific phrases I mentioned are from the word list for Didi's most recent poem challenge -- nevertheless I really like how you've fit the vocabulary into your poem, it has a very organic feel to me, as though the poem came out fully formed.Lyle Daggetthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10731915540520704368noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13358346.post-1158032187173587272006-09-11T22:36:00.000-05:002006-09-11T22:36:00.000-05:00Great poem, Pris. I love the layer and layer of im...Great poem, Pris. I love the layer and layer of images building on one another, and the really amazing range of language (populus tremula, Lepista Nuda, zylaria hypoylon, etc.).<BR/><BR/>The close-up grittiness really brings me into what's happening in the poem.Lyle Daggetthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10731915540520704368noreply@blogger.com