tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13358346.post111939683622307968..comments2023-10-10T11:56:24.878-05:00Comments on cafe' cafe': The Making Of EveAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08195202743154382432noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13358346.post-1120759852789509912005-07-07T13:10:00.000-05:002005-07-07T13:10:00.000-05:00The Making of Eve"Unlike things yoke together"~Col...The Making of Eve<BR/><BR/>"Unlike things yoke together"<BR/>~Coleridge<BR/><BR/><BR/>Summer was frying an egg<BR/>on the head of God. The Seven<BR/>Sisters were aghast at the lapse<BR/>of efficiency. The range<BR/>of emotions was complex:<BR/>God recalled The Mother<BR/>gently nuzzling his hair. The basin<BR/>filled with the sound of castanets<BR/>& the cascabels of snake tails. Winter<BR/>was beside herself, every crotch<BR/>or crutch expired—the falling <BR/>was collecting. Summer crawled<BR/>out from the hand of Earth, took<BR/>the top-hat out from the rabbit,<BR/>and took The Fall for it. Eggs<BR/>burst at their seemliness, seedy<BR/>viaducts of passionfruit juice<BR/>flowed into a red sea. Winter got her<BR/>period, and gave birth to Spring<BR/>who wanted amnesty—the country<BR/>carved out of breath expired, centuries<BR/>passed out in the confusion. History,<BR/>like a second smoke, snaked around<BR/>The Garden. And God, amid the figs<BR/>and rapture, was so tight<BR/>a Script Institute herpitologist<BR/>couldn't milk him. Picture<BR/>a moment in Paradise: The Coconut<BR/>Express just saying "yet," the robin's egg<BR/>view, the hustling guarantee of<BR/>mañana. Imagine that. Love<BR/>spawning a flood. Summer left<BR/>hunting through a drought—the sixth<BR/>sense of ash; and Adam, that little blow.<BR/>What could we do with butter brush<BR/>scuttling Autumn? God's laws clattering<BR/>ghost claws through the branches'<BR/>sudden hush? The meadow was a subway<BR/>to a heart—a sudden stop. An opening.<BR/>And we took it.Lorna Dee Cervanteshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01239920845079483543noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13358346.post-1120685779746103512005-07-06T16:36:00.000-05:002005-07-06T16:36:00.000-05:00Done! here: http://cafecafepoetry.blogspot.com/200...Done! here: <A HREF="http://cafecafepoetry.blogspot.com/2005/07/eve-speaks.html" REL="nofollow">http://cafecafepoetry.blogspot.com/2005/07/eve-speaks.html</A>bjaneprhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07212077947146090915noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13358346.post-1120418969518642672005-07-03T14:29:00.000-05:002005-07-03T14:29:00.000-05:00Here's my poem and audioblog:Making of EveHere's my poem and audioblog:<BR/><BR/><A HREF="http://splintering.blogspot.com/2005/07/my-making-of-eve-contest-entry.html" REL="nofollow">Making of Eve</A>LKDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02171027823523187126noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13358346.post-1120408226346190452005-07-03T11:30:00.000-05:002005-07-03T11:30:00.000-05:00This comment has been removed by a blog administrator.LKDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02171027823523187126noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13358346.post-1120274892175284562005-07-01T22:28:00.000-05:002005-07-01T22:28:00.000-05:00This comment has been removed by a blog administrator.CSOChttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08926466078905987563noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13358346.post-1120173287286772732005-06-30T18:14:00.000-05:002005-06-30T18:14:00.000-05:00Didi -- got your invitation, much thanks. I've joi...Didi -- got your invitation, much thanks. I've joined.<BR/><BR/>I've also posted a poem titled "the making of eve" here:<BR/><BR/>http://cafecafepoetry.blogspot.com/2005/06/making-of-eve_30.html<BR/><BR/>Thanks.Lyle Daggetthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10731915540520704368noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13358346.post-1119697404232841772005-06-25T06:03:00.000-05:002005-06-25T06:03:00.000-05:00This comment has been removed by a blog administrator.Prishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03970753027686923295noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13358346.post-1119702511580748972005-06-25T07:28:00.000-05:002005-06-25T07:28:00.000-05:00Spewed out of God's Sixth Day WIDEopen post utero ...Spewed out of God's Sixth Day WIDE<BR/>open post utero mouth, these zygotes,<BR/>twin embryos, now grown, one buried<BR/>inside the other, tumblefall into Eden.<BR/><BR/>History's first birth defect.<BR/><BR/>That story about the rib?<BR/>History's first cover-up.<BR/><BR/><I>Nixon, listen up.<BR/>God's buds did it, too!</I><BR/><BR/>No woman to ride side saddle<BR/>for long, Eve sharpens overgrown <BR/>nails, aliens her way free<BR/>through Adam's wimpy chest.<BR/>She flirts with the serpent,<BR/>finishes off the apple and tosses<BR/>Adam the worm and the core.<BR/><BR/><I>Original sin. What fun,</I> she trills.<BR/><BR/>With a shake of her fuck-me frizzled<BR/>hair and one hand lifting an,<BR/>as yet uncarressed breast, she takes up<BR/>with a horny caveman. Their two dozen<BR/>mix-breeded children scope uncountable<BR/>later debates about Origins,<BR/>birth control, and the true<BR/>author of the Kama Sutra.Prishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03970753027686923295noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13358346.post-1119697503276000612005-06-25T06:05:00.000-05:002005-06-25T06:05:00.000-05:00dzygotes in the above Eve poem should be on the sa...d<BR/>zygotes in the above Eve poem should be on the same line as the one above it. My profile pic knocks it down a line. Other than that it came out okay.Prishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03970753027686923295noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13358346.post-1119535106119581872005-06-23T08:58:00.000-05:002005-06-23T08:58:00.000-05:00The Making of EveApollo killed his Icarus,Luna lef...The Making of Eve<BR/><BR/>Apollo killed his Icarus,<BR/>Luna left her admirers sad,<BR/>Isis drove Egyptians mad,<BR/>Poseidon too wet to inspire us –<BR/><BR/>Jahweh! Only great bearded Jahweh!<BR/>Strict Father of retribution<BR/>imagined the unlikely if not impossible:<BR/><BR/>The divine surgeon operated <BR/>(although Adam was not covered),<BR/>extracted a heart-protecting rib,<BR/>created procreation and the right to choose<BR/>without preliminary laparoscopy,<BR/>laser, a host of medical students observing. <BR/><BR/>Wine we drank in celebration, huzzah!<BR/>and song, a chorus of angelic interns!<BR/>Eve! the most remarkable invention,<BR/>more exquisite than the mouse, <BR/>yet unpatentable. <BR/><BR/>Indeed, without her, snake would be unknown!<BR/>Without Eve, the apple would be a poor ungrafted thing<BR/>and Adam, a doltish peasant, a gatherer<BR/>of artichokes and not a hint of butter.<BR/>Eve is the proof that Jahweh was the best! <BR/>The one! The only! The Chief of Operations!Crispus Litvakhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11203988457407039946noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13358346.post-1119527912056755682005-06-23T06:58:00.000-05:002005-06-23T06:58:00.000-05:00Rae,Click on the main blogger page:http://www.blog...Rae,<BR/><BR/>Click on the main blogger page:<BR/>http://www.blogger.com/start<BR/><BR/>sign in.<BR/><BR/>you will see a link to this blog now on your dashboard.<BR/><BR/>click it.<BR/><BR/>add new post.<BR/><BR/>over and out.<BR/><BR/>d.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08195202743154382432noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13358346.post-1119496672440573992005-06-22T22:17:00.000-05:002005-06-22T22:17:00.000-05:00Didi,The link to my entry, posted on the blog is:h...Didi,<BR/><BR/>The link to my entry, posted on the blog is:<BR/><BR/>http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=13358346&postID=111949588087418686<BR/><BR/>Thanks,<BR/><BR/>Gingergingerivershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06324898573281421237noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13358346.post-1119482087117623502005-06-22T18:14:00.000-05:002005-06-22T18:14:00.000-05:00didi'making of Eve' audio link on my blogdidi<BR/><BR/>'making of Eve' audio link on my blogAnnMarie Eldonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08026714009098293130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13358346.post-1119481938039536612005-06-22T18:12:00.000-05:002005-06-22T18:12:00.000-05:00This comment has been removed by a blog administrator.AnnMarie Eldonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08026714009098293130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13358346.post-1119477842371194592005-06-22T17:04:00.000-05:002005-06-22T17:04:00.000-05:00GOT IT!!AnnMarie's 'the making of Eve'GOT IT!!<BR/><BR/><A HREF="http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=13358346&postID=111945523611595627" REL="nofollow">AnnMarie's 'the making of Eve'</A>AnnMarie Eldonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08026714009098293130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13358346.post-1119473163799252212005-06-22T15:46:00.000-05:002005-06-22T15:46:00.000-05:00CTGperhaps you could email me detailed instruction...CTG<BR/><BR/>perhaps you could email me detailed instructions on how you got your poem http to show up in a sep. http? for those of us who look like we are blog literate but are not really<BR/><BR/>my poem simply shows up on the cafe cafe blogAnnMarie Eldonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08026714009098293130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13358346.post-1119463635788083612005-06-22T13:07:00.000-05:002005-06-22T13:07:00.000-05:00Hi DiDiGreat contest. You will find my entry, "Ge...Hi DiDi<BR/><BR/>Great contest. You will find my entry, "Genesis Bound (The Making of Eve)," here--<BR/><BR/>http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=13358346&postID=111946307295681808<BR/><BR/>All my best<BR/><BR/>ChrisChristopher T. Georgehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15101693208817631514noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13358346.post-1119455773781615632005-06-22T10:56:00.000-05:002005-06-22T10:56:00.000-05:00cool party but I'm the first one here - that's wha...cool party but I'm the first one here - that's what being on UK time does. Hey get up you guys - the water's beautiful.AnnMarie Eldonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08026714009098293130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13358346.post-1119453346749913362005-06-22T10:15:00.000-05:002005-06-22T10:15:00.000-05:00Hi, when you post your poem, it will be part of th...Hi, when you post your poem, it will be part of the comments section but you can also post it alone to receive comments on your poem and so on and so forth. I just need to keep track of the poems on this thread. If you prefer to leave me a link on this thread to the poem on the blog, that is fine too.<BR/><BR/>d.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08195202743154382432noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13358346.post-1119452881139186232005-06-22T10:08:00.000-05:002005-06-22T10:08:00.000-05:00derrhhhif I try to leave the Eve poem on this thre...derrhhh<BR/><BR/>if I try to leave the Eve poem on this thread it will simply go to the top of the blog no?AnnMarie Eldonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08026714009098293130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13358346.post-1119450613963505012005-06-22T09:30:00.000-05:002005-06-22T09:30:00.000-05:00Parties are great!!! I can't wait to read and hear...Parties are great!!! I can't wait to read and hear everyone's poems!Birdiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15913084921058774489noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13358346.post-1119413208139805552005-06-21T23:06:00.000-05:002005-06-21T23:06:00.000-05:00Hey...Eve and I will attend. I am always ready for...Hey...Eve and I will attend. I am always ready for a party...and I have left over Absinthe from the last party... The one YOU forgot about. Great Idea. Great Idea.CSOChttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08926466078905987563noreply@blogger.com