tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13358346.post111917421677455780..comments2023-10-10T11:56:24.878-05:00Comments on cafe' cafe': StarsAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08195202743154382432noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13358346.post-1119312157403884912005-06-20T19:02:00.000-05:002005-06-20T19:02:00.000-05:0021k, thanks for the suggestions. for now, i want t...21k, thanks for the suggestions. for now, i want the "i am weak" to be there..but it does sound like an abrupt shift into that stanza. it is awkward. i will think about it..<BR/><BR/>jack and ginger, thanks for commenting. I appreciate it.JChttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08572294700043080025noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13358346.post-1119233725340030762005-06-19T21:15:00.000-05:002005-06-19T21:15:00.000-05:00S3 and S5 are particularly nice.S3 and S5 are particularly nice.gingerivershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06324898573281421237noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13358346.post-1119191417819046982005-06-19T09:30:00.000-05:002005-06-19T09:30:00.000-05:00Is it possible that this would be stronger without...Is it possible that this would be stronger without the first stanza?<BR/><BR/>& without the subtext of 'I am weak'?<BR/><BR/>enjoyed this, thanks<BR/><BR/>21deirdrehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05298478080497976934noreply@blogger.com